Date Start End
Specification Review 2/4/02 12:47 1:21
PrepTime Initials Last First Middle
5 PNB Beasley Patrick N.
A DAC Christensen David A.
A RAD Dagey Ryan A.
5 CDD Dunham Chad D.
5 TJE Emond Thomas J.
10 MSF Ford Matthew Scott
A AG Genkina Alla
A KEG Gerde Klynt Ewing
25 TAG Goldfinger Todd A.
15 DEJ Jeffries Douglas E.
5 BDM Marler Brian D.
A JKM Meador Joel K.
A BWM Meyer Brian W.
10 JMM Meyer Jennifer M.
10 SMM Milton Shane Michael
15 BJS Shell Bryan J.
0 BNS Smeland Benjamin N.
0 MAV Valovage Mark Andrew
A JIV Voils Joshua I.
A BOW Watts Bryan O.
26 DCW Willey Dale C.
131 TOTAL
# Who Page Line Issue
1 DCW title no date
2 SMM title no company or organization
3 DEJ 1 2 "also"?
4 MSF 1 edit but not enter entries?
5 MAA 1 1 requirements is misspelled
6 DEJ 1 2ndpara 2 occurrences of "much" in 5th line
7 DEJ 1 easily should be removed
8 SMM 1 subsubsections should be indented or otherwise set off
9 DEJ, MAA, TAG, 1 last sentence of 1.2.1 too long
10 DCW 1 scope never mentions how large the db will be, how robust, how many users
11 TAG 1 modified for other projects: what other projects, how to modify?
12 MSF 1 3rdpara wording of first sentence is confusing, sounds like submitted to Jan Ford instaed of system
13 SMM 1 Figure in bold --- do this everywhere
14 DEJ 1 no page number
15 MSF 1 "even printed out into..the end" sounds like it is done only once
16 DEJ 1 "even" bothered me
17 BJS 1 to interface an online database
18 SMM 2 Figure title should be in bold
19 SMM 2 list should be single-spaced since the items are single lines
20 DEJ 2 "bits' is poor word choice
21 TAG 2 wording of last item--should be "company logo"
22 DCW 2 type of employment seems to be exclusive choice, should be inclusive
23 JMM 2 submits in first sentence
24 DEJ 2 the the in last line
25 SMM 2 4th bullet representative's
26 TJE 3 jobs offers company is confusing
27 DEJ 3 wording of second sentence has case confusion
28 DEJ 3 Rose-Hulman
29 DCW 3 statement about not having web server is not a requirement, but an issue
30 TAG 3 no maintenance?
31 DEJ 4 DFD arrowheads are not lined up with lines
32 DEJ 4 enhancement of this project, or maybe the project is an enhancement
33 SMM 4 need to refer to the figure directly with its number
34 DCW use a name for the project instead of "this project"
35 SMM 4 can any phases overlap?  what is the total time of the project?
36 DCW,SMM 4 use a sequence diagram for schedule?
37 DEJ 4 now, and will even be used...
38 SMM 5 elaborate on time constraints and groups
39 DCW 5 include Jan Ford in list of contacts
40 DCW security of login is horrible
41 BJS why ASP?